In short: The comment establishes that the DEIS fails to model ignition density for the 18.2 million acres of new roads, ignores the agency's own research (PNW-GTR-509, RMRS-GTR-42-vol.6) regarding sediment and fragmentation, and fails to analyze the reasonably foreseeable amendments enabled by rescission, thereby documenting a significant gap in the analysis of wildfire and environmental impacts.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “The DEIS fails to demonstrate a net wildfire benefit”
- “roads into backcountry terrain do not stop fires, they introduce what starts them”
- “The Final EIS must model ignition density under both alternatives”
- “Calkin et al. (2023)... concluded that wildland urban fire disasters are not a wildfire problem”
- Governance Policy Process
- “The DEIS never explains why that mechanism is inadequate”
- “Amendments enabled by rescission are reasonably foreseeable and must be analyzed, not deferred”
- “The agency must reconcile this proposal with the science it produces, and has not”
- “The Forest Service must adopt the No Action Alternative”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I have organized my recreation around the roadless system for years”
- “roadlessness delivers a low density, self reliant experience roaded lands cannot”
- “The $6.1 million annual recreation loss figure obscures a class of experience no amendment restores”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “documents sediment production, hydrologic alteration”
- “post fire sedimentation costs to a Front Range municipal supply”
What it names
- Roadless areas
- Rocky Mountain
- Law cited
- 5 U.S.C. 553
- Works cited
- 10.1038/s41598-022-06002-310.1071/wf1315810.1073/pnas.231579712010.3390/f7100237
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal