In short: The comment establishes that the 2001 Roadless Rule is critical for recreation, wildlife habitat, and water quality, and documents that data from OnX indicates roadless areas have a low wildfire ignition rate (3%) compared to the high risk near roads (90% within 1/2 mile), while also noting the $10.8 billion road maintenance backlog.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “priceless memories in America's roadless areas through camping, hiking, hunting/fishing”
- “backcountry recreation opportunities across 40 states”
- “Over 17,700 miles of hiking and biking trails, over 1,500 miles of backcountry ski trails”
- “The Roadless Rule has made hunting, fishing, camping, and other recreation better”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “impact on recreation, wildlife & wildfires”
- “99% of the Roadless Rule serves as elk habitat”
- “The Tongass National Forest holds 70% of of its Chinook, coho, pink and chum salmon”
- “improving water quality, wildlife habitat”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “data shows the risk of wildfires would exponentially increase”
- “just 3% of wildfires within the last 50 years have ignited in Roadless Rule areas”
- “90% of wildfires have started within 1/2 mile of a road”
- “The rule explicitly allows for wildfire suppression and fuel reduction”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Road construction has many negative impacts for fish habitat through heavy stream-bed sedimentation”
- “Guarantee that no watersheds will be negatively affected by rescission”
- “improving water quality”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal