In short: The comment establishes that the agency's proposal is contradicted by its own DEIS data regarding wildfire risks on roaded lands, contains an internally inconsistent regulatory flexibility analysis that improperly spreads economic harms to small entities, and fails to adequately assess reliance interests as required by Supreme Court precedent.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Solitude and nature are what I go for”
- “I paddle rivers too”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “I plan future paddling trips to Virginia”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “West Virginia northern flying squirrel”
- “Cheat Mountain salamander”
- “northern long-eared bat”
- “red spruce ecosystems”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “fire density on roaded land than inside the affected roadless areas”
- “The strongest reason to reject this rescission is fire safety”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “protect headwaters feeding the Potomac”
- “drinking water of Washington, D.C.”
- “378 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
What it names
- National Forests
- Monongahela National Forest
- Roadless areas
- Cheat MountainCranberry AdditionCranberry Glades Botanical AreaGauley MountainMcgowan MountainTea Creek MountainTurkey Mountain
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal