In short: The comment places on the record quantified data regarding ecological health trends in the Greater Yellowstone Ecosystem and cites EIS page 157 to argue that Alternative 1 (no action) is the only option that minimizes biodiversity loss and habitat fragmentation for listed species.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “Wildlife species that depend upon retaining the inventoried roadless lands include grizzly bear, wolverine, wolf, elk, mule deer, pronghorn antelope, and moose”
- “habitat for such species”
- “maintain Inventoried Roadless Areas in their current protected status”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “most vital signs of ecological health are stable or improving on national park, designated wilderness, wilderness study area, and inventoried roadless area lands”
- “long-term adverse effects on biodiversity by increasing habitat fragmentation, loss of connectivity, negative edge effects, and human disturbance”
- “area of wildlands and natural habitat is shrinking rapidly”
- Governance Policy Process
- “I strongly urge that Alternative 1 (no action) of the 2001 Roadless Area Conservation Rule Rescission Draft Environmental Impact Statement be selected”
- “The EIS acknowledges that Alternatives 2 and 3 would degrade habitat”
What it names
- Roadless areas
- Wilderness Study Area
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Evidence