In short: The comment establishes that the commenter, a resident angler, has standing to object to the rescission of the 2001 Roadless Rule for IRA 418024 due to personal use of the area and documented stream temperature increases, and documents a specific gap in the DEIS for failing to analyze the foreseeable impact of road construction on Pinyon Jay habitat via Threat 7.1 and cold-water fisheries.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “measuring stream temperature every time I go out”
- “cold-water refugia the Roadless Rule helps protect”
- “sedimentation, canopy loss, and warming it brings”
- “protect watersheds delivering drinking water”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “Pinyon Jay (Gymnorhinus cyanocephalus, G3, state rank "Under Review") habitat”
- “reduce the isolation of protected areas and buffer them from external stressors”
- “species-threat-area interaction”
- “expose Pinyon Jay habitat in 418024 to fire-and-fire-suppression-related threats”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I am writing as an angler and Utah resident”
- “pulling up beautiful small high-mountain trout”
- “These are working trout streams that support real fisheries and real people”
- “I fish them. My uncle fished them for decades before me”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The DEIS fails to analyze foreseeable impacts”
- “Under NEPA, an EIS must take a "hard look"”
- “arbitrary and should be corrected before any final rule is adopted”
- “retain the 2001 Roadless Rule in its current form”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidence