In short: The comment establishes that the Draft Environmental Impact Statement (DEIS) fails to document compliance with ESA Section 7 by omitting the required conference with the USFWS regarding the Proposed Threatened Monarch butterfly in the Potato Island IRA of the Chippewa National Forest.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Climate Carbon Storage
- “carbon that is held by intact forests is not a footnote”
- “mitigate and maybe someday turn back the perils of climate change”
- “Protected areas of natural vegetation effectively cool the land surface temperature”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “value the habitat it provides to the species I care about, like Monarch Butterflies, Canadian Lynx and Bald Eagles”
- “rescission removes that barrier and enables the full suite of habitat-altering activities”
- “increased hunting, trapping, fishing, poaching, disturbance to wildlife”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “ESA Section 7 mandates conference with USFWS”
- “The DEIS must include the results of conference with USFWS”
- “Absent this documentation, the record does not demonstrate compliance with ESA Section 7”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I value them for recreation”
- “Being in these places is a sanctuary and a return to”
- “quiet, remote, and backcountry recreation values”
What it names
- National Forests
- Chippewa National Forest
- Roadless areas
- Potato Island
- Works cited
- 10.1038/s41467-018-07049-510.1126/sciadv.abo0119
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal