In short: The comment places on the record specific data from DellaSala et al. (2011) and the Forest Service's own EIS and GRAIP to document that roadless areas provide critical drinking water infrastructure, and requests that the agency evaluate the cumulative water quality impacts and public costs of rescinding the 2001 Roadless Area Conservation Rule.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “protecting roadless forests also protects one of America's most important forms of public infrastructure: clean and reliable drinking water”
- “limiting additional road construction in Inventoried Roadless Areas would reduce future risks to streams and drinking-water source areas”
- “Sediment entering streams can degrade aquatic habitat, impair drinking-water sources, and increase treatment and maintenance costs”
- “Clean water should be treated as essential public infrastructure, not simply as an environmental benefit”
- Scientific Research Evidence
- “DellaSala, Karr, and Olson (2011), drawing on Forest Service watershed inventories and research”
- “The Forest Service's own Roadless Area Conservation Final Environmental Impact Statement recognized that road construction and timber harvesting can adversely affect water quality”
- “Its Geomorphic Road Analysis and Inventory Package (GRAIP) is specifically designed to identify road-related risks to streams and aquatic ecosystems”
- “Incorporate DellaSala, Karr, and Olson (2011) and the underlying Forest Service watershed research into the environmental analysis”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “communities may face additional expenses for water treatment, watershed restoration, reservoir maintenance, and regulatory compliance”
- “These costs can ultimately fall on taxpayers and water-rate payers”
- “Quantify potential increases in drinking-water treatment, watershed restoration, reservoir maintenance, and other public costs”
- “Protecting intact watersheds is therefore a prudent investment in water security and taxpayer resources”
What it names
- Works cited
- 10.2489/jswc.66.3.78aDellaSala et al. 2011
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceRequest