In short: The comment places on the record specific deficiencies in the agency's analysis regarding road-generated sedimentation (DEIS Table 35), wildfire ignition data (DEIS Table 21), and cost-benefit calculations, while citing the Tenth Circuit's reversal of the injunction to challenge the agency's statutory authority claims.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “preserving watersheds in roadless areas will provide significantly more benefit”
- “roads and their facilities can produce up to 90 percent of the sediment”
- “put that sediment directly into the watersheds those intakes depend on”
- “water supply interests documented in DEIS Table 35”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “Opening roadless areas in that landscape to new road construction... contradicts data the agency itself produced”
- “ignition data in DEIS Table 21, which reports far higher fire density on roaded land”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I have spent as much time as I can hiking and camping throughout it”
- “I would be devastated to see the environment degraded or portions of it removed from recreational use”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “escape from the increasing suburbanization and commercialization”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The state-by-state rationale for rescission has been litigated before”
- “That prior attempt at a state-by-state replacement failed in the courts”
- “The Tenth Circuit held... REVERSE the district court's order”
- “found the 2001 rule within the authority Congress granted under the Organic Act”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal