In short: The comment places on the record specific data points from the agency's own prior findings and DEIS/FEIS documents that contradict the proposal's justification for rescinding the Roadless Rule based on wildfire risk and administrative burden, while also documenting a specific reliance interest in the existing protections.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “getting further away from civilization and crowds”
- “Abolishing roadless areas and allowing ATVs and dirt bikes everywhere completely ruins what makes them worth visiting”
- “I have planned repeated fall trips into the Angel Peak North roadless area”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million per year”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “supports Chinook salmon, steelhead, bull trout, wolverine, mountain goat, bighorn sheep, and gray wolf”
- “verified species there include Lahontan cutthroat trout, greater sage-grouse, pygmy rabbit, and elk”
- “each roadless range rises from the Great Basin like a sky island with its own ecology”
- “irretrievable values at risk”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “more than 90 percent of wildland fires are the result of human activity”
- “ignitions are almost twice as likely to occur in roaded areas as they are in roadless areas”
- “Opening these landscapes to roads and motorized access does not reduce fire risk”
- “reconcile the rescission with the ignition data in its own DEIS Table 21”
- Governance Policy Process
- “The agency should withdraw the certification and assess the small entities actually operating”
- “I ask that it identify and assess the reliance interests described in the record”
- “The agency has not identified which burdens those exceptions fail to address”
- “quantify those claimed burdens on the record rather than assert them”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Evidence