In short: The comment establishes that rescinding the 2001 Roadless Rule would expose the state-imperiled Speckled Dace in the Chiricahua IRA to harmful sediment loads from road construction, supported by specific scientific data on erosion rates and public support metrics.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “removing the barrier to road construction in a watershed”
- “sediment production from road surfaces”
- “roadless areas act as refugia for salmonids and freshwater biodiversity”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “puts Speckled Dace (Rhinichthys osculus, G4) at risk”
- “eliminates the clean spawning habitat Speckled Dace requires”
- “roadless areas substantially complement biodiversity conservation”
- Public Opinion Support
- “more than 99.8% of submitters opposed the rescission”
- “76% of likely voters support the Roadless Rule”
- “More than 100 members of Congress have co-sponsored the Roadless Area Conservation Act”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “jeopardizes nearly 58 million acres of undeveloped backcountry forestland”
- “forests have only remained intact because of the Forest Service's nearly 25-year-old commitment”
- “roadless areas substantially complement biodiversity conservation”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidence