In short: The comment establishes that the agency's regulatory flexibility analysis contradicts its own DEIS and Cost Benefit Analysis by using national averages to certify no significant impact on small entities, and that the agency failed to assess the reliance interests it solicited from commenters, thereby documenting a procedural and analytical deficiency in the rescission proposal.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “paddling the BWCA”
- “hiked countless roadless area”
- “We all need wild places - to recreate, re-connect”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Clean water for over 7,000 cities comes from the watersheds”
- “drinks water from the Deschutes watersheds”
- “Muddying the water is dangerous”
- “clear flowing streams and rivers”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “small-business certification contradicts the analysis”
- “Under Encino Motorcars and Regents, an agency changing course must assess the reliance interests”
- “ask that the agency withdraw the certification”
- “analyze in the DEIS an alternative that retains the 2001 rule's protections”
- Public Health Wellbeing
- “Research has concluded that wildness and nature are critical to human well-being”
- “Some doctors are already writing prescriptions for nature”
- “feel a small part of the entire planet”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal