In short: The commenter establishes that the rescission of the Roadless Area Conservation Rule would be devastating to the White Mountain region and would harm water quality, wildlife habitats, and economic benefits.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “headwaters for rivers that flow to the Connecticut, the Merrimack, and the Saco”
- “286 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “ruining watersheds, causing erosion”
- “roads and their facilities can produce up to 90 percent of the sediment from a timber sale”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “hiking, skiing, paddling, and photographing this country”
- “The remoteness of Kilkenny is its greatest appeal”
- “More and more people are heading into these regions precisely because roadless character is worth seeking out”
- “These forests should be managed for all of us to enjoy”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “The flora and fauna that inhabit this region need a place to thrive”
- “harming habitats”
- “I do not want to see that repeated [clearcutting]”
- “preserve the 2001 rule”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The Ninth Circuit has already reviewed that reasoning and found it wanting”
- “Tenth Circuit's holding that the 2001 rule was authorized under the Organic Act”
- “reconcile the proposal with its own cost-benefit analysis”
- “address its own prior finding that local decision-making can incrementally erode nationally significant roadless values”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledge