In short: The comment documents specific analytical deficiencies in the DEIS regarding big game population projections, habitat fragmentation application, and sediment delivery, while asserting a reliance interest under Encino Motorcars and requesting the agency to analyze an alternative retaining the 2001 Roadless Area Conservation Rule.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I hunt. What it would mean to me if this country got roaded”
- “I hike the Selway Bitterroot Wilderness, the Sapphire roadless areas”
- “The only time I truly feel free is when I'm on those lands”
- “managed for clean water, wildlife, and human recreational purposes”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “I watch Elk, Deer, Moose, bears, Turkeys as well as all the species of birds”
- “elk survival rates increased during a road closure and decreased when the gates were removed”
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “elk avoid roads and select unroaded habitat”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “The water I fish, in my own words: "I fish high mountain lakes, valley rivers and valley lakes."”
- “Water is the life blood of my valley, and it's under attack from outside mining interests”
- “clean gravel and clear current are what make them fishable”
- “quantify projected sediment delivery to the more than 7,000 municipal intakes”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “Under Encino Motorcars and Regents, an agency changing course must assess the reliance interests”
- “I ask that the agency identify and weigh the reliance interests described in the comments”
- “ask that the agency analyze in the DEIS an alternative that retains the 2001 rule's protections”
- “provide a reasoned explanation for it on the record”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal