In short: The comment places on the record specific deficiencies in the agency's analysis regarding the lack of projections for big game populations, hunter access, and biodiversity fragmentation across the affected environment, while citing specific economic data and regulatory exceptions to challenge the justification for rescinding the 2001 Roadless Area Conservation Rule.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “large roadless areas are essential to quality game habitat”
- “elk survival rates increased during a road closure”
- “elk avoid roads and select unroaded habitat”
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “watched those areas degrade when roads are extended into them”
- “Roads extended into roadless areas increase sedimentation and degrade those waters”
- “1,466 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “address watershed protection on the merits”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “The economic case for this rescission does not hold together”
- “timber revenue to the Forest Service of only $5.2 to $11.4 million a year against recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “road system already carries a $6.9 billion maintenance backlog”
- “action whose own analysis cannot establish a net benefit justifies further expanding that backlog”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I hike and camp in roadless areas outside designated wilderness”
- “hundreds of miles of motorized trails and less than 20 miles of nonmotorized trails”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “The claim that the nonmotorized rule should be revoked to provide equal access is false”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidence