In short: The comment documents specific deficiencies in the DEIS regarding the lack of projected sediment delivery, the failure to identify enforceable drinking water provisions equivalent to 36 CFR 294.12/294.13, and the failure to apply cited fragmentation statistics to the 40.1 million affected acres, while requesting site-specific analysis for named roadless areas in Wyoming.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “harmful effects of development and climate change on the waterways”
- “less water, less fish”
- “Road sediment is quantified and then set aside”
- “Twenty-four million people's drinking water is asserted away”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I hike and fish to escape from people”
- “enjoy time outdoors without the sounds of motorized vehicles”
- “enjoy the outdoors in as pristine of a manner as is possible”
- “plenty of other areas people can take their vehicles”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “wildlife pushed into other areas”
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “Good fishing depends on intact, connected watersheds, not fragments”
- “effects of the road construction and timber harvest it would newly allow”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “ask that the agency disclose and analyze the site-specific environmental consequences”
- “identify, forest by forest, which plan provisions are equivalent to 36 CFR 294.12 and 294.13”
- “analyze in the DEIS an alternative that retains the 2001 rule's protections”
- “provide a reasoned explanation for it on the record”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal