In short: The comment establishes that the commenter resides within a couple hundred yards of national forest land, specifically relying on Mt. Hood National Forest watersheds for drinking water and facing annual wildfire risk, thereby documenting specific local geographic and resource dependencies relevant to the rulemaking.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A0 none: Counted, not answered.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “Roadless areas protect habitat for over 1,600 at-risk species”
- “Roads fragment habitat, disrupt wildlife and watersheds”
- “jeopardize some of the last large, undeveloped lands in the U.S.”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “rely on its watersheds for drinking water”
- “provide clean drinking water for 60 million Americans”
- “Roads undermine this natural filtration and threaten safe drinking water access”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “wildfires are four times more likely to start in roaded areas than roadless ones”
- “The current rule already permits road-building and small-tree logging for fire mitigation”
- “zeroed out Wildland Fire Management”
- Public Opinion Support
- “The Roadless Rule is the most popular rule in USDA history”
- “75% of Americans support the Roadless Rule”
- “rescission would ignore the will of the American people”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal