In short: The comment places on the record specific data from DEIS Table 21 showing higher fire density on roaded lands, challenges the agency's regulatory flexibility certification regarding small entities in the Tuolumne River area, and asserts a reliance interest based on the agency's own solicitation for such interests.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I can only reach the scenes I care about by walking there”
- “What draws me to all of it is wildness that has not been cut open”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “outfitters, guides and tour operators as affected”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “DEIS Table 21 reports far higher fire density on roaded land”
- “The proposal leans on wildfire and fuels management as reasons to open these areas”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The Tenth Circuit concluded the rule was within the authority Congress granted”
- “The agency needs to address that holding directly”
- “The agency certifies no significant impact on small entities while its own record states”
- “The agency must identify and weigh the reliance interests”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “I photograph rare species and beautiful California landscapes”
- “The 2001 Roadless Area Conservation Rule protects that”
- “wildness that has not been cut open”
- “Tuolumne River roadless area sits inside the Sierra”
What it names
- Roadless areas
- Tuolumne River
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: EvidenceLegal