In short: The comment establishes that the proposed separate evaluation of the Pemigewasset and Kinsman Mountain IRAs fails to account for the cumulative impacts on a shared network of 31 species, including Northern Myotis and Tricolored Bat, thereby violating NEPA's requirement to assess cumulative impacts under 40 CFR 1508.7.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “31 species depend on connectivity between these IRAs”
- “preserves gene flow, seasonal migration routes, and recolonization pathways”
- “abundance of life within them”
- “Northern Myotis (G2), Tricolored Bat (G3)”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “prevent road encroachment”
- “protecting it from the consumptive practices that destroy biodiversity”
- “ecosystem services are to our livelihoods”
- “wild places have in our collective identity”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “no administrative substitute for the Rule's categorical protection”
- “NEPA requires the DEIS to assess cumulative impacts”
- “Evaluating rescission impacts on each IRA separately violates this requirement”
- “public reliance interest that federal rulemaking is obligated to consider”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “outdoor enthusiast”
- “backpacking through the Absaroka Mountains”
- “inspired me from childhood”
- “quiet, remote, and backcountry recreation values”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal