In short: The comment places on the record specific data from the agency's own EIS and Cost Benefit Analysis demonstrating that roaded lands have higher fire densities and that the projected economic benefits do not outweigh recreation losses, while simultaneously documenting the agency's failure to assess specific small business impacts or weigh the reliance interests of commenters in the Chugach National Forest.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Time in nature is healthy and calming”
- “The variety of trails and options I have now is wonderful”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “I have planned my recreation and my expectations for these places around a rule”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “The agency's own record demolishes the wildfire rationale offered for rescission”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “reports far higher fire density on roaded land than inside the affected roadless areas”
- “explain why it is departing from its own prior findings”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “total timber volume affected by this rule is less than 0.5 percent of total United States production”
- “net present value spanning negative $92 million to positive $199 million”
- “expanding a road system already carrying a $6.9 billion maintenance backlog”
- “assess the actual impact on the specific permit holders operating in these roadless areas”
- Governance Policy Process
- “The agency is now proposing to undo that without holding a single public meeting”
- “The agency has invited reliance interests and then declined to weigh them”
- “It must identify and weigh the reliance interests described in the comments it receives”
- “built through more than 600 public meetings and 1.6 million comments”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapRequest