In short: The comment establishes that the proposed rescission of 36 CFR part 294, Subpart B, would result in $6.1 million in annual recreation and tourism losses in the White River National Forest area and ignores documented opposition from Tribal governments, thereby failing to support the ecological and cultural risks of the rule change.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “protecting watershed integrity, drinking water sources, habitat connectivity for wildlife”
- “biodiversity of some of the last largely unfragmented forest landscapes”
- “Roads are the primary vector for the sedimentation, erosion, habitat fragmentation, and introduction of invasive species”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “backbone of the recreation- and tourism-based economy”
- “recreation and tourism interests could see estimated losses of $6.1 million annually”
- “operable, accessible roadless terrain”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “protect the headwaters and watersheds that supply drinking water”
- “protecting watershed integrity, drinking water sources”
- “sedimentation, erosion”
- Tribal Sovereignty
- “majority of Tribal governments consulted oppose this rescission”
- “threats to ecological health, sacred sites, and subsistence resources on ancestral homelands”
- “governments with the deepest and longest-standing relationship to these landscapes”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Legal