In short: The comment documents that the agency's small-business certification contradicts its own DEIS findings regarding outfitters and guides, and that the agency failed to assess reliance interests despite soliciting them, while requesting the agency withdraw the certification, weigh reliance interests, and analyze an alternative retaining the 2001 rule's protections.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Let's keep our water clean”
- “Once it is contaminated, it is very expensive to fix”
- “Clean water is not only healthier, it is less expensive for municipalities to handle”
- “reap watershed... benefits”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “predators, as I know they are often indicators of ecosystem health”
- “reap watershed, biodiversity, atmospheric, and other benefits”
- “OUR public lands should be managed for US, and more importantly for our descendants”
- “They deserve the chance to visit them, yes, but also to reap... biodiversity... benefits”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I hike in the Eastern Sierra...Virginia Lakes, Lundy Lakes, Convict Lake”
- “Any sort of stunning view with no sign of human construction just lifts my soul”
- “recreation dollars outstrip all other commercial use COMBINED”
- “I plan trips into these areas year after year”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The small-business certification contradicts the analysis beside it”
- “Under Encino Motorcars and Regents, an agency changing course must assess the reliance interests”
- “I ask that the agency withdraw the certification”
- “analyze in the DEIS an alternative that retains the 2001 rule's protections”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal