In short: The comment places on the record specific deficiencies in the agency's analysis regarding wildfire ignition data (DEIS Table 21), economic net benefits, and water quality impacts on 378 municipal intakes, while citing Tenth Circuit and Ninth Circuit precedents to challenge the legal and procedural basis for rescinding the 2001 Roadless Area Conservation Rule in specific forests in Tennessee.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “most biodiverse temperate forests in North America”
- “salamander species found nowhere else on Earth”
- “These species need undeveloped land”
- “black bear, hellbender, brook trout, cerulean warbler”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “We need clean water for the survival of every living species”
- “378 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “roads and their facilities can produce up to 90 percent of the sediment”
- “Fewer than 12 percent of the watersheds fed by these roadless areas have impaired streams today”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Being out in nature, among wildlife, in the peace and quiet is essential for my mental health”
- “I hike and camp all over east Tennessee”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “So do I. We need natural, undeveloped land for our survival”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The agency has tried replacing this rule with local decision-making before, and that attempt failed in court”
- “The Tenth Circuit held... the 2001 rule was within the authority Congress granted”
- “The agency must explain how this proposal avoids the deficiencies the Ninth Circuit identified”
- “The agency's own record undermines the case for rescission at every turn”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidence