In short: The comment places on the record specific data from the agency's DEIS Table 21 regarding human-caused ignition densities, identifies 1,522 municipal water intakes in affected watersheds, and documents a gap in the regulatory flexibility analysis by arguing that the no-significant-impact certification fails to assess impacts on specific small entities in the affected areas.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Access to quiet, healthy, remote forests is directly connected to my health and well-being”
- “opportunity to hike and camp in the Mt. Baker-Snoqualmie National Forest”
- “places people can go to connect with nature and natural beauty, away from roads”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Access to clean water is a basic human right”
- “1,522 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “Roads lead to increased pollution and threaten public health and wellness”
- “roads and their facilities can produce up to 90 percent of the sediment from a timber sale”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “Human-caused ignition density is 22.4 fires per million acres per year on roaded National Forest System land against 3.0 inside the affected roadless areas”
- “agency has not quantified the expected increase in human-caused ignitions from new road access”
- Governance Policy Process
- “regulatory flexibility analysis reaches a no-significant-impact conclusion by spreading an estimated $9 million annual expenditure loss”
- “agency must identify and weigh the reliance interests described in the comments”
- “An agency changing course must assess the reliance interests its prior policy created”
- “I ask that the agency explain why the proposal departs from this finding”
What it names
- Roadless areas
- Boulder RiverHiggins MountainMt. Baker SouthMt. Baker West
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal