In short: The comment establishes that the Draft EIS contains an uncited 29 percent fire-ignition statistic that contradicts peer-reviewed data (Aplet et al. 2026) and presents internally inconsistent species counts (300 vs. 327), while documenting specific recreational and habitat values of roadless areas to support a request for a 120-day comment period extension.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “More roads mean more wildfires”
- “wildfires were four times as likely to start in areas with roads”
- “wildfire-ignition density near roads... far exceeds that in wilderness”
- “fire-risk rationale for rescission”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “contain habitat for 57% of vulnerable terrestrial wildlife”
- “Roads fragment habitat and degrade migration corridors”
- “habitat for many imperiled species such as California condors, grizzly bears and wolves”
- “sustain wild salmon”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “protected roadless areas have offered abundant outdoor recreation opportunities”
- “millions of people take advantage of the free... access to these public lands”
- “roadless areas protect 11,337 climbing routes”
- “Large sections of the Continental Divide, Pacific Crest, and Appalachian National Trails traverse protected roadless areas”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “Under Blue Mountains Biodiversity Project v. Blackwood... an agency may not rely on unsupported or unexamined scientific conclusions”
- “Under Native Ecosystems Council... agencies may not present inconsistent or unexplained figures”
- “I request the agency cite the source dataset”
- “extend the public comment period... from 32 days to at least 120 days”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal