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In short: The comment places on the record specific deficiencies in the DEIS analysis regarding habitat fragmentation, big game survival, carbon storage, and the lack of mitigation for 327 ESA-listed species, while requesting that the agency quantify these impacts, complete ESA consultation, and analyze an alternative retaining the 2001 Roadless Rule.
Scored with own additions — A family member whose own text beyond the shared letter was scored and combined with the letter's score.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “likely to adversely affect 327 ESA-listed species”
- “unbroken habitat”
- “unblemished by roads”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “elk survival rates increased during a road closure”
- “elk avoid roads and select unroaded habitat”
- “watch wildlife and birds”
- “project the effects on big game populations”
- Climate Carbon Storage
- “holding carbon”
- “contain about 5 percent of the stored forest carbon”
- “quantify the change in carbon storage and sequestration”
- “0.9 billion metric tons”
- Governance Policy Process
- “Every conservation alternative was eliminated by how the purpose was written”
- “forecloses the comparison NEPA requires”
- “restate the purpose and need”
- “analyse at least one protective alternative in full”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal