In short: The comment documents that the Draft EIS fails to provide the site-specific NEPA analysis required by 40 CFR 1502 for the Stony Mountain IRA in Bitterroot National Forest, arguing that a programmatic assessment of 2,332 areas is insufficient to capture the distinct ecological and watershed impacts of that specific 44,057-acre area.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “destroy the ecosystem and fragment one of the few remaining large wilderness areas”
- “intact roadless areas are emerging as some of the most important climate refugia”
- “57% of vulnerable U.S. wildlife species have suitable habitat in roadless areas”
- “unfragmented stopover and breeding habitat that hundreds of species depend on”
- Climate Carbon Storage
- “holds carbon and buffers temperature”
- “Tongass roadless areas contain very large biomass and soil carbon stocks”
- “old-growth protection as a critical climate solution”
- “climate refugia on the continent”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “unique watershed, habitat, and ecological characteristics”
- “intact hydrology”
- “Section 404 of the Clean Water Act (CWA) establishes a program to regulate the discharge”
- “no discharge of dredged or fill material may be permitted if... the nation's waters would be significantly degraded”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “provided a solitude and wildness that deserves to be protected”
- “incredible experience of vast forests and rivers and mountains”
- “people whose lives have been shaped by access to them”
- “undeveloped backcountry forestland”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal