In short: The comment establishes that the agency's proposal to rescind the Roadless Rule contradicts its own DEIS data regarding fire density on roaded lands, ignores documented wildlife corridors used by jaguars, relies on a flawed regulatory flexibility analysis that averages national losses rather than assessing specific permit holders, and fails to weigh reliance interests created by the 2001 rule.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “jaguars have been documented crossing from Mexico”
- “Verified species of the Coronado sky islands include jaguar, elegant trogon, Mexican spotted owl”
- “roadless corridors as the only viable pathway for the northernmost extent of jaguar range”
- “connective tissue between sky islands”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “Opening these corridors to roads does not protect them”
- “far higher fire density on roaded land than inside roadless areas”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “an approach the Ninth Circuit rejected”
- “explain how this proposal avoids the legal deficiencies that defeated the prior state-by-state replacement”
- “Under the principles the Supreme Court articulated in Encino Motorcars and Regents”
- “agency changing a longstanding rule must identify and genuinely weigh the reliance interests”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “go there to escape the summer heat”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “outfitters, guides, and tour operators as affected”
- “where to hike, and what they value about a place like Mount Lemmon”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal