In short: The comment establishes that the DEIS fails to quantify sediment delivery to 7,000 municipal intakes, identify enforceable water protection provisions equivalent to 36 CFR 294.12/294.13, reconcile the addition of road mileage with admitted maintenance shortfalls, apply cited fragmentation rates to 40.1 million acres, and properly assess small business impacts, while documenting the commenter's 20-year recreational use of the White River National Forest and observed water quality degradation.
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- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
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Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
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Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “seen more sediment in the water, increased bank erosion”
- “quantify projected sediment delivery to the more than 7,000 municipal intakes”
- “24 million people use water originating within potentially affected roadless areas”
- “Lack of maintenance commonly has detrimental effects on water quality”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I hike, camp, fish, rock climb, forage, ski, and ice skate”
- “seek its quiet to get away from everyday noise”
- “My future children should not inherit fewer wild places”
- “estimates at least $6.1 million/year in lost recreation benefit”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “New roads also fragment habitat, increase erosion and stream sediment, spread invasives”
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “add disturbance to intact places”
- “apply the cited fragmentation range to the 40.1 million acres”
- Governance Policy Process
- “The agency owes the public comparable effort in return”
- “ask that the agency respond to each issue raised here”
- “analyze in the DEIS an alternative retaining the 2001 rule's protections”
- “provide a reasoned explanation on the record”
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