In short: The comment documents that the agency's DEIS contains internal contradictions regarding wildfire ignition rates and bird habitat loss, specifically citing Table 21 data showing higher human-caused fire density on roaded lands and research indicating significant bird abundance reduction, while also asserting that the regulatory flexibility analysis improperly certifies no significant impact on small entities despite acknowledged economic losses.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “birds I watch in that area depend on exactly this kind of intact, unroaded habitat”
- “bird richness declines with road presence in forested habitat”
- “road-noise experiments in a roadless area cut bird abundance by over a quarter”
- “Roads fragment the habitat, introduce noise that the agency's own cited research shows causes significant species avoidance”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “Human-caused ignition density is 22.4 fires per million acres per year on roaded National Forest System land against 3.0 inside the affected roadless areas”
- “quantify the expected increase in human-caused ignitions that would follow from new road access”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “affect outfitters, guides, and tour operators”
- “places where the birds are still present, the quiet is still real”
- “Public lands should be kept whole for all Americans”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “hold the agency to its own evidence”
- “reconcile the rescission with the ignition data in its own DEIS”
- “withdraw that certification and conduct an honest assessment of the small entities”
- “The agency must identify and weigh the reliance interests that commenters describe”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceRequestLegal