In short: The comment establishes that the agency's own data show road construction in roadless areas increases fire risk and that the economic case for rescinding the rule is weak, while also requesting specific burdens not covered by existing exceptions and withdrawing a small-business certification.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “Opening roadless areas to new construction does not reduce fire risk”
- “reconcile the rescission with the ignition data in its own draft environmental impact statement”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Our water comes from the Cibola National Forest, and we must protect it”
- “roads and their facilities can produce the overwhelming share of sediment from a timber sale”
- “expense of watersheds that are still largely unimpaired”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “There is nothing like being in the forest alone, no crowds”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “places where children can learn to love and appreciate what is still intact”
- Governance Policy Process
- “The rule as written 'generally banned road building subject to limited exceptions'”
- “The agency certifies no significant impact on small entities while its own DEIS names outfitters, guides and tour operators as affected”
- “The Forest Service held more than 600 public meetings and took in 1.6 million comments to build the rule. It has held none to undo it.”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific placeLocal knowledgeAnalytical gap