In short: The comment documents specific deficiencies in the agency's analysis of small business impacts and reliance interests, citing the DEIS and Cost Benefit Analysis to show contradictions in the regulatory flexibility analysis, and requests a site-specific environmental analysis and an alternative retaining the 2001 rule for five named roadless areas in the Angeles National Forest.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “love the outdoors and hiking”
- “hike, birdwatch, and enjoy the wildflowers”
- “small outfitters and guides who work this same country”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “beautiful land hosting many ecosystems”
- “We, humans, cannot exist in a vacuum without the many species around us”
- “animals were killed or displaced, environments were wiped out”
- “protect it”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “small-business certification contradicts the analysis”
- “Under Encino Motorcars and Regents, an agency changing course must assess the reliance interests”
- “ask that the agency withdraw the certification”
- “analyze in the DEIS an alternative that retains the 2001 rule's protections”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “The ground filters rainwater”
- “depend on rainwater to refill our aquifers”
- “In this mediterraneam climate this is vital”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal