Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Alternative.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “habitat fragmentation may damage the integrity of said resources”
- “wild populations can be limited in migration and range, and also become genetically bottlenecked”
- “roads can invite air, soil, water, noise, and light pollution”
- “break up important wildlife corridors for migration, mating, and feeding”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “chemical maintenance runoff into the soil and water”
- “particulate pollution from dusty roads”
- “greatly compromised as a habitat when there is too much particulate suspension blocking light and increasing heat”
- “roads may need to intersect a stream or river, possibly creating an unnatural barrier to fish passage”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Road access will make wildfire response easier and faster”
- “most wildfires are anthropogenic, and can be prevented by limited or no human interaction”
- “Occasional wildfires are important to maintaining healthy forests”
- “roads... may inhibit animals paths as they flee from a fire”
- Governance Policy Process
- “allowing smaller governing bodies to make decisions regarding roads tailored to their local areas”
- “rescinding the rule will significantly reduce environmental protection from unnecessary human involvement”
- “decisions... to instead be made quickly and perhaps rashly”
- “I propose that the criteria for 'necessary' roads stays”