In short: The comment places on the record specific data from the agency's own DEIS and Cost Benefit Analysis regarding increased wildfire risk, sedimentation impacts on 378 water intakes, and $6.1 million in lost recreation benefits, while requesting the agency reconcile these findings with its justification for rescinding the Roadless Area Conservation Rule and weigh the commenter's reliance interests.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “contamination of pristine waterways”
- “fight to save the Buffalo River”
- “378 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “roads and their facilities can produce up to 90 percent of the sediment”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “untouched hiking spots, breathtaking overlooks”
- “the kind of silence that even rowdy Scout boys could feel”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “birdwatching, hiking, and photography that draw people to these forests”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “roads through forests are the number one cause of fire”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “reconcile that claimed justification with this ignition data”
- “dangers of new road construction”
- Governance Policy Process
- “No one answered me or explained why the agency was moving in this direction”
- “The agency must identify and weigh the reliance interests”
- “The proposal solicits 'any reliance interests in the current rule'”
- “The case for punching new roads... has not been made”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidence