In short: The comment establishes that the Draft EIS fails to provide a quantified nationwide cumulative impact analysis and relies on an uncited, non-reproducible timber harvest baseline, violating NEPA's requirement for a detailed statement of environmental effects and the hard-look standard.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “specific quality of roadless country — its acoustic character, the absence of mechanical intrusion”
- “Finding a place without road noise or the sound of engines is increasingly difficult”
- “I journey into the wilderness and roadless areas specifically for the difficulty and sense of adventure”
- “enjoy the unique inheritance of America's national lands free from the impacts of noise and air pollution”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “Uncited Methodology for Historical Timber Harvest Baseline in IRAs”
- “unsupported general statements do not satisfy the hard-look standard”
- “NEPA requires 'a detailed statement… on… reasonably foreseeable environmental effects'”
- “Absence of Quantified Nationwide Cumulative Timber Harvest, Road Construction, Sedimentation, and Fragmentation Analysis”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Rescission would diminish the few vibrant watersheds we have remaining”
- “support fishing, hunting, and drinking water”
- “Sedimentation”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “High overlap exists between landslide susceptibility and areas of endemism for mammals, birds, and amphibians”
- “forests protecting both biodiversity and landslide risks to human society are important conservation targets”
- “fragmentation”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gap