In short: The comment documents a specific first-hand observation in the Cache National Forest where the roadless Mount Naomi Wilderness Area produced clear water while surrounding roaded and logged drainages produced muddy water, supporting the argument that rescinding the 2001 Roadless Rule would negatively impact water quality and increase wildfire risks.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “fragment wildlife habitat”
- “disrupt elk calving, deer and moose birthing areas”
- “destroy a lot of the few remaining sanctuary areas wildlife needs to remain viable and healthy”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “impacts to water quality”
- “protect a large number of our country's clean water sources”
- “streams were running high and muddy until we got to High Creek, and it was running high and clear”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Opening roadless areas to timber harvesting will NOT help... reduce wildfire risks”
- “elevating not reducing wildfire risks”
- “increased road access elevating the risk of human-caused fires”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “small short-lived benefit to local economies, with little to no long-term economic gain”
- “timber in the Roadless areas would be below-cost sales”
- “costs of building the roads... make the roadless areas economically unprofitable”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapLegal