In short: The comment places on the record specific acreage data for roadless areas in the Pisgah National Forest, cites the agency's own EIS data on fire density, and documents the commenter's request for the agency to reconcile its proposal with Tenth Circuit precedent and NEPA requirements regarding protective alternatives.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Alternative, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “shelter species including black bear, hellbender, brook trout, cerulean warbler, more than 30 endemic salamander species, and the northern long-eared bat”
- “preserve forest untouched by human impact”
- “keep forests like Lost Cove and Wilson Creek intact for generations to come”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “protect wild headwaters that flow to both the Atlantic and the Gulf”
- “378 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands than on essentially unroaded lands”
- “Creating new roads within a system of unmanaged, unmaintained roads is a public safety concern”
- “reconcile its current proposal with the ignition data in its own draft environmental impact statement”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The Ninth Circuit rejected that substitution”
- “The Tenth Circuit addressed that question directly and held... the rule was within the authority granted under the Organic Act”
- “Protective alternatives were dismissed as inconsistent with deregulatory executive orders rather than evaluated on their merits”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal