In short: The comment places on the record specific peer-reviewed data regarding wildfire ignition density and water supply dependencies, cites specific pages of the Economic Analysis that concede unquantified recreation losses, and requests that the FEIS quantify recreation exposure in affected IRAs before relying on an analysis that admits it cannot measure the magnitude of those losses.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “countless hikes in this area”
- “lose access to recreate in these incredible places”
- “moment of solitude to soak in the peace”
- “forgone recreation benefits”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “integrity of the headwaters themselves could be compromised”
- “national forests supply drinking water to at least 124 million people”
- “Roads are a major cause of water pollution”
- “maintaining clean drinking water for communities”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “peer-reviewed science shows the opposite”
- “wildfire-ignition density was 7.99 fires per 1,000 hectares within 50 meters of roads”
- “building roads into roadless areas is likely to result in more fires”
- “we don't need to rescind a policy that could make this even worse”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “Certain-direction losses of unknown and unmeasured magnitude are precisely what NEPA requires”
- “I request the FEIS quantify recreation exposure”
- “Robertson, 490 U.S. 332; State Farm, 463 U.S. 29”
- “removal of that protection will lead to their fragmentation”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal