In short: The comment provides empirical data and legal arguments demonstrating that the proposed rescission lacks a factual basis regarding fire risk, creates disproportionate economic harm, violates the Endangered Species Act, and fails to complete required tribal and subsistence consultations.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I bike, camp, hike, and hunt on national forest land, and roadless areas are usually the reason for the trip”
- “I have ridden, camped, and hiked in roadless country in North Dakota, Arizona, California, Utah, Vermont, Maine, Pennsylvania, and Colorado”
- “Rescission would change how I spend my time, where I travel, and what I plan my years around”
- “roughly $6.1 million in annual recreation losses”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “The evidence on fire contradicts the rationale for this rescission”
- “ignition density lowest in wilderness (1.75 fires per 1,000 hectares) and next lowest in roadless areas (1.97)”
- “Section 294.13(b)(1)(ii) allows cutting generally small diameter timber to reduce the risk of uncharacteristic wildfire effects”
- “direct fuels funding to the wildland-urban interface outside roadless areas”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “The rulemaking is incomplete”
- “The DEIS analyzes neither”
- “The agency approved it that October without waiting for the biological opinion”
- “I ask the Department to retain 36 CFR part 294, subpart B in full”
- Tribal Sovereignty
- “The Department concedes substantial direct effects on tribes, reports consultations ongoing”
- “tribes requested a strengthened rule or a co-stewardship alternative during scoping”
- “The ANILCA Section 810 subsistence hearings run September 29 through October 1”
- “complete consultation and the subsistence analysis while the public can still respond”
Attachments
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The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidence