In short: The comment establishes that the DEIS fails to provide quantified, roadless-specific data on forest health impacts and does not perform sensitivity analysis on acreage-derived percentages, rendering the rationale for rescinding the 2001 Roadless Area Conservation Rule arbitrary and capricious under the APA.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “recreational time on public land specifically because of the conditions roadless designation maintains”
- “beloved and respected by others who frequent it”
- “Time in the protected forest and proximity to it is one of the reasons I live and enjoy living in the Skagit Valley”
- “devastating for me personally and for my community who love and respect the outdoors”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “New road construction, reconstruction, and associated development fragment habitat, introduce disturbance, and eliminate roadless character”
- “Road construction compacts soil to roughly 200 times the density of undisturbed forest soil”
- “creates disturbance patterns that persist for decades”
- “salmon runs of Alaska, wonderfully intact and protected by the Roadless Rule”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “unsupported factual premises violate APA 5 U.S.C. § 706(2)(A)”
- “arbitrary and capricious under APA 5 U.S.C. § 706(2)(A)”
- “an agency that identifies a data-quality problem must grapple with its implications for downstream conclusions”
- “I request quantified, roadless-specific data... before this rationale is relied upon to justify rescission”
- Scientific Research Evidence
- “no acreage figures, no roadless-specific fire, insect, or disease incidence statistics”
- “no comparison of forest health outcomes between roaded and roadless lands”
- “0.4-million-acre discrepancy between the 44.7-million-acre IRA figure and the 44.3-million-acre National Forest System land figure”
- “I request that the agency provide sensitivity ranges or error bars for every acreage-derived percentage”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gap