In short: The comment places on the record specific geographic locations (Snow Mountain area in Mendocino National Forest and Siskiyou area in Klamath National Forest) with their respective roadless acreage, identifying them as critical habitats for declining species like Blacktail deer and Northern Spotted Owl, and asserting that the proposed rule's road development would cause irreparable harm to these specific places.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A0 none: Counted, not answered.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “sustainability of wild places and the wildlife which rely on these habitats”
- “habitat for multiple important species, including blacktail deer”
- “important home for the Northern Spotted Owl and other species”
- “parceling and developing habitat — through building roads and opening areas for development — puts undue pressure on species”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “As an avid hiker, backpacker, and hunter”
- “giving up critical recreation, wildlife, and habitat”
- “spend time in the Snow Mountain area”
- “spend time in Siskiyou area”
- Public Opinion Support
- “overwhelming, broad public support for the Roadless Area Conservation Rule”
- “95% of submitted comments were in favor of these protections”
- “over 600,000 comments overwhelmingly (99%) supported preservation”
- “urge the agency to listen to the American public”
- Economic Impact Fiscal
- “fails to make economic sense for agencies like the National Forest Service”
- “stretched budgets, scarce resources, and maintenance backlogs”
- “having to pay for the inconvenience of doing so”
- “safely and appropriately maintain additional road and access infrastructure”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal