In short: The comment documents that the agency's regulatory flexibility certification relies on national averages rather than local impacts on specific small entities in the Angeles National Forest, fails to weigh solicited reliance interests despite a 24-year history of protection, and ignores DEIS data showing a 7.5:1 ratio of human-caused ignitions on roaded versus roadless land that contradicts the proposal's wildfire rationale.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Governance Policy Process
- “agency's own numbers undermine its regulatory flexibility certification”
- “Averaging a harm across thousands of uninvolved businesses to make the harm appear trivial is not analysis”
- “The agency has also invited reliance interests and then declined to weigh them”
- “An agency that changes course after twenty-four years of established protection is obligated to account for the expectations its prior rule created”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Human-caused ignition density is 22.4 fires per million acres per year on roaded National Forest System land against 3.0 inside the affected roadless areas”
- “human-caused ignitions increase in abundance with proximity to roads”
- “The agency must quantify the expected increase in human-caused ignitions that new road access would bring”
- “weigh that increase against whatever reduction in wildfire hazard is claimed”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “places like the Arroyo Seco roadless area... remain places where people can be with nature for generations”
- “My family camped and hiked there in the summers and sledded and threw snowballs in the winters”
- “My family's decades of recreation in the Arroyo Seco area”
- “expectation that those 4,703 acres would remain protected for future generations”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “1,034 municipal water intakes sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “California alone holds 381 inventoried roadless areas totaling 4,389,760 acres”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal