In short: The comment documents that the agency's proposal to rescind the 2001 Roadless Area Conservation Rule fails to reconcile its regulatory analysis with its own DEIS data regarding small entity impacts, wildfire ignition densities, and habitat fragmentation, specifically requesting that the agency withdraw its small entity certification, quantify wildfire risks, and apply fragmentation findings to the 40.1 million acres of potentially affected environment.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “removing riparian vegetation can raise stream temperatures”
- “reduce egg survival, rearing densities and growth of coho salmon”
- “Essential Fish Habitat and critical habitats managed by NMFS”
- “North Fork American River corridor covers 38,495 acres”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “Wild areas need to stay wild so that wildlife has room to roam”
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “amazing resource for wildlife”
- “keep it pure, keep the roadless rule”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I want my kids and my grandkids to see nature undisturbed by roads”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “people who know them, who raft them, who photograph them”
- “outfitters and guides operating on rivers like the American have direct financial exposure”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Human-caused ignition density is 22.4 fires per million acres per year on roaded National Forest System land”
- “human-caused ignitions increase in abundance with proximity to roads”
- “We can't maintain current roads. Why build more?”
- “quantify the expected increase in human-caused ignitions that new road access would bring”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal