In short: The comment documents that the DEIS fails to project sediment delivery to over 7,000 municipal intakes, does not identify enforceable forest plan provisions equivalent to 36 CFR 294.12 and 294.13 for 24 million people's drinking water, and does not apply its cited 13-75% biodiversity fragmentation finding to the 40.1 million affected acres.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Road sediment is quantified and then set aside”
- “Twenty-four million people's drinking water is asserted away”
- “clean gravel and clear current are what make them fishable”
- “quantify projected sediment delivery to the more than 7,000 municipal intakes”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “Fragmentation is quantified and not applied”
- “habitat fragmentation reduces biodiversity by 13 to 75 percent”
- “road it fragments habitat, brings weeds, causes roadkill”
- “This planet is as much theirs as ours”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Fishing on national forests has been the highlight of many trips”
- “Trails in roadless areas have saved my life”
- “access to a peaceful float is paramount for every desert lovers sanity”
- “I feel so lucky to have seen so many critters that live here”
- Resource Development Extraction
- “Having a road present with mining trucks and logging trucks would ruin this wholly”
- “This is purely a cash grab for extractive nature rape”
- “Look at mine waste piles and the liquid that comes out of them”
- “Just logged out mined out hell whole for your pockets to get bigger”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal