In short: The comment places on the record a specific challenge to the rescission of the 2001 Roadless Area Conservation Rule, documenting that the agency's own draft EIS data contradicts the wildfire rationale by showing higher fire density on roaded lands, that the economic analysis fails to establish a net benefit against a $6.9 billion maintenance backlog, and that the Tenth Circuit has already upheld the rule's statutory authority under the Organic Act and Multiple-Use Sustained-Yield Act.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “greatest sources of my community's drinking water”
- “watershed my community drinks from”
- “My family drinks from this watershed”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “grizzly bear habitat”
- “Yellowstone cutthroat trout, wolverine, elk, bighorn sheep, and grizzly bears live”
- “scenery and wildlife are abundant”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “record destroys the wildfire rationale”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “Opening them to roads does not reduce fire risk”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I hike, camp, and canoe on lakes”
- “My family paddles the many lakes and rivers”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
Attachments
3 files. Counts as 1 — Counts as one: The attachments enclose no one else's submissions; the comment counts as one.
- Own letter
- Supporting material
- Own letter
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapAlternative