In short: The comment establishes that the DEIS fails to meet NEPA's 'hard look' standard by lacking site-specific analysis of invasive species impacts on Whitebark Pine in the Mt. Baker Noisy - Diobsud IRA, and documents the specific severity and scope of these impacts as well as the threat of stream fragmentation from road construction.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “Whitebark Pine (Pinus albicaulis, G3)”
- “Invasive non-native/alien species/diseases”
- “old growth forest”
- “see wildlife there”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “Stream fragmentation is a leading threat to freshwater fish diversity”
- “impassable culverts at road–stream crossings”
- “chronic sediment inputs”
- “destabilizes slopes”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “outdoor enthusiast”
- “we camp and hike in this region”
- “enjoy the Baker Lake trail”
- “lose the oportunity to hike”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “NEPA requires the agency to take a hard look”
- “The DEIS fails this standard”
- “specific regulatory prohibition”
- “rescission would remove that prohibition”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidenceLegal