In short: The comment establishes that the agency's proposal to rescind the Roadless Area Conservation Rule is internally inconsistent with its own DEIS findings on wildfire risk, economic net benefits, and wildlife/water impacts, and fails to address the Tenth Circuit's legal holding regarding the rule's validity.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “look for elk, deer, and bighorn sheep”
- “elk avoid areas near roads and select unroaded habitat”
- “roads built for extraction may have altered mule deer migration routes”
- “protect big game habitat, fisheries, and wildlife connectivity”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Thirty years of camping and hiking in the Pecos Wilderness”
- “We go there because it is remote and wild”
- “recreation losses of at least $6.1 million a year”
- “My kids grew up in that place and they want to return to it”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “739 municipal water intakes in the Southwestern region sit in watersheds containing affected roadless areas”
- “Clean water is a finite resource”
- “roads and their facilities can produce up to 90 percent of the sediment from a timber sale”
- “abandons the wildlife and watershed protections”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “We have already seen fire damage in the Pecos Wilderness and we do not want to see more damage from man-made causes”
- “Roads bring more ignitions”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidence