In short: The comment establishes that the administrative record lacks site-specific analysis for Northern Myotis and quantified analysis of invasive-species spread associated with new road mileage in the Devil's Den 09083 Inventoried Roadless Area, citing specific data from the USFWS Biological Assessment and state wildlife agencies to document these deficiencies.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “creating habitat for threatened and endangered species”
- “critical habitat that will be lost”
- “Northern Myotis (Myotis septentrionalis, G2)”
- “displace our native species that our insects and birds rely on”
- Water Quality Quantity
- “threat to our water quality”
- “alters hydrology”
- “delivers chemical contaminants to adjacent habitats”
- “protect watersheds that deliver drinking water”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “Construction inevitably introduces invasive plant species”
- “Roads create favorable conditions for invasive plants”
- “81 (60 percent) are threatened by invasive or non-native species”
- “IRAs often have less non-native invasive plants due to the lack of roads”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I want to see it in its pristine state”
- “much less likely to visit a protected place that has been cut up with roads”
- “This land belongs to the public”
- “Don't sign it away”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gap