In short: The comment establishes that the Draft EIS fails to analyze the specific finding from Olden et al. (2026) regarding the Roadless Rule's role as the primary protection for over 100,000 kilometers of rivers and requests that the Final EIS quantify the loss of this protection under Alternative 2.
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Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A3 weak: Substantive, but easier to set aside.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
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- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “primary protection mechanism for more than 100,000 kilometers... of rivers”
- “watersheds influenced by roadless areas provide public drinking water to an estimated 25 million Americans”
- “Protecting headwaters on public land helps protect water quality”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “countless hours hiking, mountain biking, backpacking, adventure racing”
- “quiet, clean streams... and places where people can travel under their own power”
- “supporting recreation and freshwater biodiversity”
- Environmental Protection Biodiversity
- “wildlife habitat, connected forest”
- “freshwater biodiversity”
- “removing a durable national safeguard and replacing it with case-by-case decisions that may allow new roads, fragmentation”
- Scientific Research Evidence
- “Recent peer-reviewed science shows why this matters”
- “Olden et al. (2026), in PLOS Water”
- “The Final EIS should directly analyze how many river miles would lose their primary protection”
What it names
- National Forests
- Mark Twain National Forest
- Roadless areas
- Anderson MountainBig CreekPiney CreekSpring Creek
- Works cited
- 10.1371/journal.pwat.0000538
Attachments
1 file. Counts as 1 — Counts as one: The attachments enclose no one else's submissions; the comment counts as one.
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapRequestLegal