In short: The comment documents that the agency's Draft Biological Assessments fail to explain the factual basis for departing from the 2001 finding that the Roadless Rule's prohibitions beneficially affect listed species, specifically regarding the loss of alpine tundra habitat for white-tailed ptarmigan in the Williams Fork Ptarmingan Adjacent area.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A1 strong: Must be answered — it names the law.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence, Legal.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
Topics
- Wildlife Habitat
- “Alpine Tundra Habitat for White-tailed Ptarmigan”
- “Loss of connectivity between alpine patches through habitat fragmentation”
- “reduce the number of imperiled wildlife species considered "poorly represented"”
- “The habitat and species that could be destroyed”
- Legal Regulatory Framework
- “In 2001 the Agency Found These Prohibitions Benefited Listed Species”
- “FCC v. Fox Television Stations, 556 U.S. 502, 515 (2009)”
- “Organized Village of Kake v. USDA, 795 F.3d 956, 966–68 (9th Cir. 2015)”
- “I request the FEIS directly address the 2001 beneficial-effect finding”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “Since I was a kid I've wanted to explore public lands”
- “future generations from being able to explore these spaces”
- “You can't recreate these places once they are gone”
What it names
- Roadless areas
- Rocky MountainWilliams Fork Ptarmingan Adjacent
- Law cited
- 556 U.S. 502795 F.3d 956
- Works cited
- 10.1016/j.gecco.2021.e0194310.1111/csp2.288
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Analytical gapEvidence