In short: The Gunnison and Colorado watersheds are where the commenter spends significant time, and they oppose the rescission of the 2001 Roadless Area Conservation Rule due to its impact on river health and water quality.
Scored directly — The comment's whole text was scored on its own.
Scorecard
Each dimension is scored 0–3; the eight sum to the substance score out of 24.
- Specific placeNames a specific location — from a region down to an exact creek, trail, road, or map reference.
- Local knowledgeDraws on a first-hand connection to the place — visits, sustained activity, occupation, or a professional role.
- EA analysisEngages the agency's environmental analysis directly.
- Analytical gapIdentifies something the analysis fails to address.
- EvidenceBacks claims with specific facts, data, or research.
- RequestMakes a specific, actionable request of the agency.
- AlternativeProposes a different course of action.
- LegalCites statutes, regulations, or legal obligations.
How hard it is to set aside
A2 moderate: Hard to dismiss — it shows cause and effect.
Owed an answer on Analytical gap, Evidence.
Standard dismissals it defeats
- Misreads the proposal The agency says the comment misunderstands what is proposed. Defeated when the comment engages the proposal or a named place directly.
- No cause and effect shown The agency says the comment asserts a harm without showing how the action causes it. Defeated when the comment shows the mechanism.
- Outside the scope The agency says the comment asks about a different action. Defeated when the comment is specific and tied to this proposal.
Still open to the agency
- Alternative already eliminated The agency says it considered and eliminated the alternative the comment proposes, with a reason. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Already addressed The agency says its analysis already covers the point. Defeated when the comment cites the law itself: there is no analysis to cite against a statutory claim.
- Deferred to a later decision The agency says the point belongs to a later, site-specific decision. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Not required The agency says the analysis the comment asks for is not required. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Preference noted The agency notes the comment as a statement of preference and takes no action on it. Cannot be defeated from the comment text alone.
- Certified not substantive The agency certifies the comment raises nothing substantive. Defeated when the comment alleges illegality, which is substantive by the definition the certification runs on.
Topics
- Water Quality Quantity
- “seen firsthand what roads and expanded human access do to a river's health”
- “pristine headwaters of the Gunnison River”
- “headwaters of the Colorado River, which supplies water to 40 million people”
- “water I drink from the Gunnison and Colorado watersheds”
- Recreation Tourism Public Use
- “I hike and backpack in the Gunnison National Forest”
- “I paddle those rivers and their tributaries”
- “lost recreation benefit at a minimum of $6.1 million a year”
- “My paddling, my hiking”
- Forest Management Wildfire
- “Building a road into a forest at high risk from uncharacteristic wildfire effects could increase the incidence of human-caused fires”
- “human-caused wildland fire is nearly five times more likely to occur on essentially roaded lands”
- “reconcile the rescission with the fire density data in DEIS Table 21”
- “far higher fire incidence on roaded land than inside the affected roadless areas”
- Wildlife Habitat
- “hike and paddle in the elk habitat of the Gunnison country”
- “elk survival is known to rise during road closures and fall when gates reopen”
- “elk select unroaded land for cover and forage”
- “Roads are not a neutral instrument in these landscapes”
The comment
Shaded passages are the ones the analysis quoted as evidence for a dimension: Specific place